请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误

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很抱歉我回复晚了，因为我实在是太累了，所以早早的就去睡了。很抱歉的知道困扰你的问题似乎还没有解决，但是真的很高兴又能在twitter上看到你。最近我过得其实也不怎么好，考试快到了，学业的压力很大。最近也发生了很多事（生活上的改变），使得我有点沮丧。好在昨天我的一个朋友约我去海滩边上走了走，看着开阔的蓝天大海，心情也好了很多。希望你身边的一切也能渐渐好起来。

你的翻译：有多个错处，已替你更三了如下。
Sorry about my (later relay要改为 late reply 或 replying you late), I was so tired yesterday and went to bed early. Sorry (about 要改为 to hear that) your problems seems still not to be resolved, but really glad to see you start(要用 starting) your twitter again. Actually I don't think I was fine these days either, the exam is coming (made me very tension 要改为 making me rather intensify) and too many change(changes 是复数) happen(happened) around me these day made(making) me a little upset. But fortunately one of my friends invite(invited 过去式) me (要加 to) walk along the beach yesterday and I god(是 got) some peace when I see such (a range 能改为 an open) sea and blue sky. Hope everything will (要加 soon) be fine around you (要加 too).

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Sorry about my later reply . I was too tired so I went to bed early yesterday. I'm sorry to know that the problem that bothered you remain unsolved.But I'm really happy to see you again on twitter.Things haven't been so well for me. My exam is coming soon and I 'm under great pressure.Something happened recently and it changed my life as well,which make me frustrated,But fortunately one of my friends invite me to walk along the beach yesterday and I 'm a lot better when I saw the beautiful sea and blue sky. Hope everything will be fine soon.

Sorry for my late reply, because I was too tired, so early and went to sleep. I'm sorry to bother you know the problem does not appear to have been resolved, but it's really very nice to see you on twitter. Recently I had in fact not how good, the exam is coming, academic pressure big. Recently there have been a lot of things (life changes), which makes me a little depressed. Fortunately, yesterday one of my friends asked me to go to the beach walk, looking at the broad blue sky and the sea, the mood or a lot. Hope everything around you can also recover.

I'm glad to see you on twitter again. I have been fine... The coming of the eaxm... tension是n.&vt. so应改为adj.形式或用nervous too many changes of my life around... invited me to walk... when I saw...