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【科技与学习：参考范文】
The picture vividly depicts that a teacher is asking a pupil to answer a simple
math question . Unfortunately, the child cannot answer such an easy question without tech help. In fact, the phenomenon conveyed in the picture does not surprise us, because
as the science and technology develops, the topic concerning the side effects of
technological advancement increasingly arouses people’s attention.
Undoubtedly, the drawer of the picture aims at reminding us that we should use technology in a proper way and not be too tech-dependent to solve the simple problem independently.
It is well known that thanks to the development of human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. But, while enjoying the convenience produced by tech, we must alert its harm. Being
over-addicted to technology will cost our health, independence, wisdom
，creativity and even our ability to live.
Weighing the pros and cons of the technology, perhaps the best policy is to
apply it properly. At the same time, we must avoid its harmful part. Furthermore,
young people should be advised that depending too much on technology is hardly beneficial for them at all and more importantly they are expected to acquire the capacity to think independently.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 当人们越来越依赖技术去解决问题，人类独立思考能力却退化。
Whether the ability of thingking of human beings will deteriorate in the future if people tend to combat with problems through tecnology? While some people suggest that peopele become increasingly lazier as a result of the development of techniques, some others hold strongly that we think and deal with dillemas more productively and effectively than before. In my opinion, the development of teconoly relies on human independent thinking ability, and in ture enhance the ability. As far as I am concerned, . We Human Beings are dependent on technology more than before. Many probles and task require the involvement of techniques, such as mathematics calculating, logic deduction and many dangerous outdoor task, such as mine deducing, electricity conducting and so on. In sum，tecnology has been developing since it appeared and people increasingly rely on it. However, form an overall point, the capability of thinking is enhancing all the time, thus promoting the former. All in all, these two subjects are complementary and promoting each other.