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Hi steven:
yesterday you told me about your country and your life.and now.i will tell you about my city.
My home is at the northeast of shenyang.there are over 7million people in our city.so you can see.my city is a large city.the transport is very convenient,and the subway is being built.though the environment is so bad several years ago but now it is so clean and the air is so fresh.my school is near to my home.it only take three stop by bus in the way to school.there is a big press in our city but i love my city!
How do you think of my school?tell of about your thinkings.hoping receive your e-mail!
Yours
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