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part3 请帮我把以下我写的英文句子修正语法帮我改通顺一点的拜托><!!! 紧急需要修正

2025-03-11 06:17:07

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回答1：

原文的中英文表达稍微有点重复凌乱了，稍稍整理了一下，请参考。

今天一早
我跟著我的educator带著孩子们一起坐在地上剥玉米的叶子
孩子们都很兴奋的用力拔著玉米的叶子,不停的拔直到看见黄色的玉米
我相信通过这样的活动孩子们也可以从中获得乐趣和学到东西
因为下午会有一个很大的活动,必须用到玉米
所以才让孩子们帮忙拔玉米
My educator and me had children together with us to strip the leaf of corn, sitting on the ground early this morning.
Children were excited.They kept stripping the leaf hard till they saw the yellow color of corn came out.
I believe children got lots of fun and learned something from this kind of work. There were a big event in the afternoon, and would need the corn.
That's why we had children help to take off the leaf of the corn.

之後做完活动,我们就准备好出去外面散步了
我和我的educator 带著孩子们去公园玩
每到去公园的时刻孩子们都特别兴奋和开心
因为他们最喜欢去公园玩了
在散步去公园的路途中我会问孩子们一些问题并且唱歌给他们听
他们都好高兴
也因为这样我和孩子们的关系也越来越接近,越来越好
每次带孩子去外面散步到公园玩是我最喜欢的时刻因为可以和孩子们有很棒的时间一起玩

When it's done, we went out for a walk in a park . Every time we go the the park, Children are very excited and happy because that's their favorite.
On the way to park, I would ask them some questions and sing songs. They are so happy. This is help making our relationship closer and closer, better and better.
Every time walking to the park with children is my favorite also because I could have a great time with children.

玩完之後我们就散步回去教室了
之後大概下午要四点我们带孩子出去daycare的外面
Daycare 外面的停车场已经都布置好了

这时的我才发现原来我们今天要和家长们一起在外面做活动阿
我的coordinator 准备了烤好的玉米要发给孩子们
孩子们排队去领玉米,然後去准备好的位置上吃
孩子们都吃得很高兴可能是因为自己剥的玉米的关系
後来的时间我们就在外面和孩子以及他们的家长互动
真是热闹极了有点像派对的感觉

After that we took a walk back to classrooms.Till 4 in the afternoon, we took children out of the daycare.
The parking place was well prepared then.

I realized until then that we were to do the activity with parents outside. My coordinator sent out the roasted corns to children.
Children needed to stand in line to get their corn and went to the their own seats. Children ate the corn happily , guess because they took off the corn leaf themselves in the morning.
We interacted with children and their parents out side for the rest of time. It's so that felt like a part.

通过这样的大型活动
我们不但可以和家长们有交流
也可以让孩子感到很享受在这样的气氛当中

今天真的是个很棒的一天
希望下次能有这样的时间和家长以及孩子们一起做活动
This kind of event not only gave us opportunity to communicate with parents but children also could enjoy and learn.
It's such a great day and I hope there will be another time likewise to do things together with children and their parents.

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part3 请帮我把以下我写的英文句子 修正语法 帮我改通顺一点的 拜托><!!! 紧急需要修正

part3 请帮我把以下我写的英文句子修正语法帮我改通顺一点的拜托><!!! 紧急需要修正