是孩子写的吧?总体来说挺不错,但是在初学阶段,最好避免用and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.这种从句,要把句子分开,说明白,可以说In the afternoon, my father asked me to help him water the plant. I finished the work and felt very happy, the flowers are smiling in the wind beautifully.
另外,最后一句应该用was而不是is。还有,unforgetive不好,可以换成外国人更加常用的amazing
祝你学习进步
help him water the plant 在water前加to
首先注意大小写吧!