帮我看一下英语作文

2024-12-31 13:03:51

推荐回答（5个）

回答1：

1.Many parents think students shuold go to cram school on weekends.W e shuold not to go out with friends. change to:
Many parents think that students shuold go to cram school on weekends and they shuold not go out with friends.加了连接词
2.But I think it is great pressure for teenagers to learn,we shuold be allowed to go out with friends on weenkends.change to:
I think they shuold be allowed we to go out with friends on weenkends because I think it can give us a big improve.
3.After studying for a week, we meed to have some of their time.change to:
After studying for a week, we meed to have some spare time.
4.Even if allowed, we must also pay attetion to safety. 这句不是不好，而是如果这样接下去，就会很怪，你前面说的是在周末时玩的好处，现在有突然有even《即使》这词，那就成了：即使如果给，也要注意安全。这就跟前面的文字语气不相符。还有即使《even》=如果《if》，不能出现在同一句子。so, it can change to:If our parents allowed us to have the spare time, we will be very thank for it,but we need pay attention of the safety too,or we'll be hurt.

回答2：

不错

回答3：

But I think it is great pressure for teenagers to learn,we shuold be allowed to go out with friends on weenkends这句完全不知道要表达什么

回答4：

Many parents think students shuold go to cram school on weekends.W e shuold not go out with friends,But I think it is a great pressure for teenagers to learn,we shuold be allowed to go out with friends on weenkends.After studying a week,we need to have selftime.I think it would be helpful to our study.and we can learn some from our friends through some interesting things.if allowed, we must also pay attetion to safety.只是直接检查，没根据具体意思。

回答5：

Mang parents think students should go to cram school at weekend. And we should not go out with our friends.But I think it takes great pressure for teenagers to study ,we should be allowed to go out with friends at weenkend.after having study for a week,we need to have some time for ourselves.I think it would be helpful for our study,and we can learn more knowledge from our friends about some interesting tings.Even if allowed,we also must pay more attentions to our safety,

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