帮忙润色改改一篇英语演讲稿

我看下来之后觉得你是想表现你对于未来生活的迷茫，而并不是环城旅行。如果环城旅行是你所想表达的东西的话，建议还是重新写一篇吧。不过还是帮你改改。
I like travelling，because I can meet many people and visit many beautiful places .
One day, I was walking in a street. I found that people were all walking fast as if they had little time left. Just as I was wondering why, my friend called me. She asked me where I was, I told her I was in the city center and how noisy it was, how busy people looked. I asked her whether we would be person like them, lives seemed tired and no endless of boring work. She thought for a while,"maybe..."
After that I went to the library, borrowing some books about France, it has been my dream to go there to learn about design, how I wish I could paint in the ocean of lavender. I like that romantic life.
I returned home at last. The village which I live in is a little remote, but she is hugged by green mountains, I love her.
I looked deeply into the sky, I know wherever I go, I will come back ,here is always my home. Whenever I feel tired ,I will seek consolation here.

你这个没有突出你的主题想法啊，就是一个流水账作文啊，你要突出你认为的东西，如果主题是环城旅行，第一段完全没必要，后面的和环城旅行也没有太大的关系~~~~~应该是先定环城旅行的主线，然后碰到了图书馆，描写图书馆的外貌，然后走到某个街道，描写整个街道，然后街道上有个小店，店老板对你很好，在然后如何回去的，~~~~~~演讲做一个描写性的作文来演讲貌似很别扭啊

我喜欢旅行,因为我可以见到许多人参观许多美丽的地方。
有一天,我走在大街上。我发现很多人都走快就像时间所剩无几。正如我不知道为什么,我的朋友打电话给我。她问我我在哪里,我告诉她,我就在市中心,它是多么吵,忙碌的人们观看。我问她是否会喜欢它们,生活的人似乎累了,没有没完没了的无聊的工作。她想了一会儿,“也许……”
从那以后,我去图书馆借一些书,关于法国,这一直是我的梦想,去那里学到的设计,我多么希望我能画海洋中的紫色。我喜欢浪漫的生活。
我回到了家中。我所居住的村庄是一个小偏远的行列,但她是抱着绿色的山,我爱她。
我就观看,见有深入的天空,我知道无论我走到哪里,我将回来,这一直是我的家。每当我感到累了,你的面我正要寻求安慰。

2楼改得好

嗯···主题不够明确。如果主要意思是环城旅行的话，那么主题最好为游记。如果是说孤独的话，主题最好悲伤一些，路上遇见的景色也黯淡一些。如果主题是说不管哪里都只有家最好的话，最好多多进行对比。所以主要还是主题确定。请楼主最好再附加一下大致的主题，这样我们才能帮忙啊～