1 novel that written by Lois Lowry 》 删除that 或者改为novel that was written by Lois Lowry
2 as far as 》 as long as
3 to today's socity 》 to today's society
4 sereval 》 several
This book is a science fiction written by Lois Lowry. The novel is a "cautionary" tale to us in several ways as long as we can link it to today's society
没有语病，只是有两个单词拼写错了 sereval -several socity-society
This book is a science fiction novel that written by Lois Lowry
去掉that
several 写错了 嘿嘿 语法没错误 但是说法比较中式。
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