【谁帮我修改一下英语作文】

你好。 第一句有问题, 首先缺动词， 至少要在English writting course 后面加上is, 不要just, 用only。但我觉得这样更通顺One semester English course will come to end soon.
I first appreciate 明显中式英语， 我首先感谢， 不对， 应该是. First 或first of all,I appreicate. passionate 不要大写. 最好把do not 合成don't 光是do not 有强调的成分。 Your art of teaching let me developed an interest in

English writing. 中式英语让人很confused. 还是I achieve great accomplish on English writting because of your art of teaching, 这样美国人能看懂。

since 后面该用完成时， Since, I have passed CET-6. so now, my English is very poor 可以换成that's why my English is so poor, 这样更流畅。

advice 是名词， advise 是动词， 这里该用advise.这句I advice that you can use our writing more often我建议你用我们写作？， 不懂confused, 考虑修改。

下一句还是不懂， 我集中你分析课程的知识， 你讲理论的时候我走神？？？
首先我是不明白， 但你,the course you Analysis

our writing always let me focus on the course。 应该改为 I focus on your analysis writting on the course, but, on the other hand.
上课走神为 sometimes I lack concentrationwhen you are teaching.

you can pass me some good examples, 不要用pass, 用send. 去掉in it. We can loading it??? 应该是 we can look at it 把， 至少can 后面不能加现在分词啊。

最后Please Accepted my Respect to a teacher中式英语考虑修改。

The English writing course which is just for one semester will soon come to an end.
First of all,I was delighted that I have got such a Passionate teacher so that I have received an interesting English writing lesson.Also I have developed an interest in English writing because of your art of teaching.
Since I have passed CET-6 in my sophomore year,I stopped learning English.So now ,My English is quite poor.
I would like to give some advice for you that perhaps you may use our articles as the example for illustration more frequently.As for myself,in the course, the discussion on our articles always make me concentrated in the lesson.However,once you illustrated some theory about writing,than I became distracted.
In addition,I wonder if I could have your E-mail address,so that you can send some good essays to me and we can have a look on it ,or maybe it's the one you will analysis in the class.

Last but not least,Please accept my Respect to a excellent teacher.
Wish you to have good days forever.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!

（it's
already
good
enough,
but
a
few
comments
and
corrections
which
you
can
find
from
comparing
your
original
one)
In
college,
reserving
a
seat
is
a
common
phenomenon.
So
different
people
have
different
views
about
whether
or
not
should
reserve
a
seat.
Some
people
think
that
it
is
convenient
for
their
study.
Also
they
can
have
friends
to
study
next
to
them.
And
some
students
worry
about
coming
late
without
seats.
However,
many
students
don't
agree
with
this
kind
of
behavior.
First,
they
think
it
is
immoral
behavior.
Second,
this
kind
of
behavior
will
destroy
the
friendship
between
classmates.
Third,
it
gaves
a
bad
impression
to
others.
Weighing
up
these
two
arguments,
I
prefer
the
second.
My
point
is:
Everyone
should
do
things
for
others.
Besides,
we
should
not
be
late.
If
everyone
harbor
the
idea,
I
do
believe
that
we
will
be
happy
in
our
college
study.