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With the economical development,the energy has gradually involved our humanity's food, clothing, living and traveling, as well as aspects of study, work, production and culture, we all contact them every time, therefore we also have to save energy every time.
摘要随着经济的发展,逐步涉及我们人类能量的食物、衣服、生活和旅游,以及方面的学习、工作、生产和文化,我们都与他们联系,因此我们每次也节省能源。
In the daily life, we should save the water.When you're washing your hands, face, or washes with soap, don't let the clear water flow all the time, it consumes 11-19 litres water each minute.Therefore we must have to reduce the time of boiling water.So long as we pay attention to each small detail of saving water, like washing the bowl, clothes, and vegetable, it's a piece of cake.
在日常生活中,我们应该节约水当你洗手,用肥皂洗过脸,或者,别让清澈的水中流,它消耗了11胜19败升的水每一分钟因此,我们必须要降低了时间沸水只要我们注意到每一个小细节,节约用水、喜欢洗碗、衣服、蔬菜、这是小菜一碟。
Except the water resources, there is also the electricity in our life. Saving electricity is not only saves the energy ,it also reduces the air pollution.Switch off lamp and the electric appliance in your family.Do not let the lamp light day and night, and make good use of the natural light in daytime.When you're watching television, remember to turn off the computer or the radio.Don't forget to clean the dust on the electric appliances,which could reduce the consumption of energy.In summer,as less as possible to turn on the air conditioning, the best way to regulate room temperature is using natural air flowing .You'll find a good many ways to prevent heatstroke.For instance,you may use the ventilator to replace the air conditioning, and it can save many electric powers.
除了水资源,还有一种电在我们的生活中。节电不仅仅是节省能源,降低空气污染关掉灯和电器在您的家庭不要让灯光的日日夜夜,充分利用自然光线在白天当你看电视的时候,记得要关掉电脑或收音机吗出门的时候,可别忘了打扫灰尘的电器,可降低能源消费的. 在夏天,尽量少开空调,最好的办法是采用天然房间的温度调节空气流动,就能找到一个好多种方法来预防中暑例如,你可以使用呼吸机代替了空调,这可以节省许多电力。
The energy brings convenience and wealth to us, what are the steps and ladders for us to move towards the happiness, so let us treasure the energy!
这个能量带来便利和财富,哪些步骤和梯子,我们走向了快乐,所以让我们珍惜的能量。

Therefore we must have to reduce the time of boiling water
因此我们还要减少平时开水的时间
Saving electricity is not only saves the energy ,it also reduces the air pollution.
节电不仅可以节能同时还可以减少空气污染
Switch off lamp and the electric appliance in your family
离家时要关掉电灯之类的家中用电器
as less as possible to turn on the air conditioning, the best way to regulate room temperature is using natural air flowing
尽可能少使用空调，调节室内温度的最佳方法是利用自然的空气流动（即多通风）
You'll find a good many ways to prevent heatstroke.For instance,you may use the ventilator to replace the air conditioning, and it can save many electric powers.
那么对于防暑，你也可以找到很多好的方法。例如，用风扇代替空调，这样可以节省很多电力
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