大家帮我看看这段英语有语法错误没？帮忙修改一下，麻烦大家了~

你是在写PS吗？
建议文字供你参考：
After i chose the path of law as my career, every time that i read any fictitious character of a female lawyer in a novel, i had pictured myself in her position. One character named Jennifer Parker from the novel "rage of angel" motivated me a lot, from which I have realized and now strongly believe that it is not chance but choice that determines one's fate. My destiny seemed to have beeb set by my choice of the scale when I was one year old.

还有，第一句建议还可以写成，after i decided to devote my career to justice, ... ...

还有个建议，如果你是真的在写PS，建议你就不要写抓周这种事例了，都被写滥了，没有新意了。你可以深刻发掘一下真正对你有影响的有深度的事例。如果不是在写PS就忽略我的建议。