求高人帮我翻译一段文章 中译英

楼上显然不合语法，又是在线翻译吧~~

The“Who has the biggest brain”is a very interesting intellectual game,and have various types of questions.Because of the game is limited by time,though the questions are easy enough,the players have to fast enough and have great judgment in order to finish more questions efficiently.The appearance is plain but exquisite,and the cheerful background music made the players from nervous to pleased.When the test has down,no matter the score is high or low,the comment and a proper picture always makes people smile.However,there're some shortcomings in the game,and I have some advices for it:

1.The loading time is too long when start the game,take meatures to accelerate the loading speed.

2.In the test of “memory test”,the cue of “press any key”should be put in the center of the screen.Some carelessly players would not notice the small words at the bottom,so they may wast their time to wait the system's order.

The other game called “minigolf”is a great game for leisure.The exquisite appearance,richful scenes and the simple way to operate fits different people of any ages.The proper music makes people calm whlie the sound of the ball collides the wall is vivid.There're various styles of clothes,clubs（球杆）,shoes and pants etc,people could buy some of the properties to make up their own character in the game and show their special characteristic.All the details makes the game more colorful,but some aspects are need to be improved.

1.Before impacting,gives a close up to the club and the character would be more attractive and vivid.

2.When people makes a “hole in one”(一杆进洞)，it's better to have some flowers and colorful ribbons waft around to make the mood vivid.

3.When practice,there should be a function“replay”,if people can not pass this level,they couldn't have to start from the very begining.

4.Make a "power bar"espeically which could make the game more human-based.The order is:choose the direction,clik the left button of the mouse to confirm,then the power bar appears,one more click to confirm the power and impact the ball.

哎哟可算翻完了，我都不好意思说我翻了多长时间，但是是逐字翻译的昂，没用软件，翻得都饿了，高尔夫知识都增长了不少~！
那个高尔夫球杆的问题，我查了百科，球杆分好多种，什么一号二号三号的，club是统称，就用了这个,还有一杆进洞，都是专业术语，查的我眼都绿了，睡觉去了。

(楼下的建议说的对哦，我虚心接受哦都改好了，下面的应该没错了吧，哎理解万岁吧，我翻到半夜脑子都木了~第一句错了也不代表整篇都错吧，你说是吧~)

"Who has the biggest brain" is an interesting intelligence game.It has various types of questions.Each test question is rather simple,but because of time constraint,the players must react fast enough and make quick and accurate judgments to answer these questions correctly so that they can score higher.The austere yet refined scenes and the bright background music make this otherwise tense game relaxing and enjoyable.When all questions are answered,regardless of the marks scored,the comments given are humorous accompanied with a suitable picture,making the players delighted. However,there are some areas of improvement.I have several suggestions for this game:
1. It takes a long loading time to enter the game.Maybe there can be a way to improve the loading process.
2. The reminder "press any key" is best to be put in the center of the screen during the memory testing round.This is because some less careful players may not have noticed the small words on the bottom line and would wait two seconds for the system to start automatically.This is a waste of time and would affect the players' results.

Another game "minigolf" is a very good leisure game.Its refined pictures,rich scenes,and simple operation procedure make it suitable for all age groups of players.Its suitable background music make players calm down.The sound of the balls hitting the wall is also quite real.There are also the shops which sell various kinds of clothes,cues,shoes and pants,etc.Players can mould the characters using their favourite props to show their own personality.These details have made the game the more delightful,but I feel that there are certain areas that need improvement:
1 Add in a close-up scene with the cue and the player's head before the player hits the ball.This can make the screen more attractive and make the characters more alive.
2. It's best to sprinkle flowers and coloured bands from the top of the screen when the player hits the ball into the hole at one go.This can spice up the atmosphere.
3.When the player is practicing,a "replay this round" function should be introduced so that the player can play the round he wants without replaying all the rounds.
4.Add in a separate key that controls strength.The sequence of operation should be:choose direction,click left key of mouse to confirm,strength control appears,click left ,confirm level of strength and hit.This would make the game more personalised.

呼……很长的一段阿。但大意是没错的，希望能帮到你。

先翻译这么多，你看质量怎么样。

who has the biggest brain是一款有很意思的脑力游戏，题目类型多样，虽然每个测试题都很简单，但是因为有了时间的限定，为了能得到更高的分数，所以要有足够快的反映速度和足够高的判断能力才能更多的且准确的完成这些题目。朴素而精致的画面，加上欢快的背景音乐使一款本来让人很紧张的测试游戏变得轻松愉快。当所有题目做完后，无论最终分数的高低，所给出的评论都很幽默，加上一张恰当的图片，让人总是能够开心一笑。
"Who has the biggest brain" is a very interesting mental game with various types of questions. Although each test is very simple, however,there is a time limit in order to get higher grades, therefore you need to be fast enough and making strong judgement so that you can get more and accurate results for these questions. Simple and delicate picture plus the cheerful background music will make a nervous testing game relaxed and happy. When all the questions are answered, regardless of what the final score is, comments are very humor with a proper picture so that it can always let us smile.

大致就这样了~你看看吧~~

The who has biggest brain is very a style of intelligence game with meaning, the topic type is diverse, although each test is all easy, because having is horary of limit, for canning get higher score, so have to have enough quick reflection speed and enough Gao of the judgment ability then can be more of and accurately complete these topics.Simple but fine appearance, pluses joyful background music to make 1 style originally let person the very nervous test game became easily pleased.After all topics finish doing, the height of regardless end score, the commentaries of given are all very humorous and plus a fitting picture, let the person can always be happy a smile.However, there are some shortage in the game, too
To this game I have a few suggestions:
1.Loading time is very long while getting into a game, had better try to speed a reading of game speed
2.The pass that tests in the memory, the press any key hint had better put in the screen exact center, because some careless players probably can't take notice of most below that lines up very small word, wait for after system's 2 an automatic beginning, held up time thus, influenced result.

Another game minigolf is a style of very nice recreational game, elegant appearance, abundant scene, in brief of operate a way, make him suited for the player community of each age segment.Fitting background music makes the person able to calm down, the ball bumps the shot wall voice to make it also very lifelike.There is also the enactment of store system, in there are the clothes of various style, the ball pole, shoe, pants etc. prop, the player can purchase the prop that oneself likes to create his/her own game person and make a show of own personality.This detail fills a color for game not a few.But some aspects I feel to still need to be modified
1.Join a close-up lens before hitting ball with racket, be like for ball pole and the head of person, can make the person be more attracted to the appearance like this, make person flexible
2.Under the sistuation that one pole beats to beat in ball, should from the screen of topmost carry to cast net fresh flowers and colourful take, so the ability is better to set off by contrast atmosphere
3.In the practice, should establish one heavy play the function of this pass, so need not have to lead all passes, again from the first slowly beat oneself wants to play of that closes
4.Establish 1 to establish a strength slot alone.The sequence of operation is:Choose a direction, the single shot mouse left key makes sure and appears strength slot, the single shot mouse left key, make sure that the strength is worth and hit ball with racket, set like this more humanized.

汗，楼上我佩服你手工翻译，但是你第一句话就错了。例：interesting intellect game--interesting是adj,intellect不是，e正确应为intellectual!还有the questions are various也错！应为the questions vary。various 后面要跟名词的！

第一句就错，后面也8用看了。前面更是用软件翻译的。要高质量的给我留言吧～