几句情景对话..请高手帮我翻译成英语..谢谢...

楼上几位的翻译我都看了，错误多多少少还是有一些。有语法上的，也有表达习惯上的。
以下是我的翻译。我在美国生活两年了，所以对这些日常用语还算熟悉。

S: Hi. Can I help you?

B: Yes. I'm looking for a ring.

S: How about this one?

B: Wow that looks great. How much is it?

S: $500. But you can get 10% off with a VIP card.

B: Well, thanks. But it might be a little too expensive for me.

S: This ring is new in stock. Its unique design is very popular among young ladies these days. Are you sending one to your girlfriend?

B: I need one for a proposal.

S: Congrats! This would make a perfect gift! I'm sure your gf is gonna like it.

B: Sorry but this is just a bit out of my budget for now. How about some other options?

S: Well, take a look at this one then. It's only $50.

B: Cool. I'll take this one. Can you wrap it up for me please?

S: Sure. Is there anything else I can do for you?

B: That's all thanks.

S: Alright. Do you have a membership card?

B: No.

S: Would you like to check out with cash or credit?

B: Credit please....here you go.

S: That will be $50. Here's your ring, your credit card, and your receipt.

We look forward to seeing you again! Have a nice day!

B: Thanks, you too. Bye.

翻译时注意：
1. 尽量意译，因为美国人的说话方式跟中国有所不同。特别是在购物的场合，他们用词一般比较委婉。

2. 结账时“Cash or credit”是最常用的固定搭配。

3. 美国没有“发票”这种东西。结账时机器打出来的那张单子(receipt)就是购物、纳税凭证，所以没有必要索取发票。

4. 结束道别时一般必说“Have a nice day”或者"Have a good one"，遇到周末或节假日说“Have a great weekend/Christmas/...”等等。

1.Salesperson:我能帮助你么? (Hello!Can I help you?)

Boy:恩.我要看一个戒指.(Yes.I am looking for a ring)

S:看看这个钻石戒指.怎么样?(How about this diamond ring,sir?)

B:哇.太美了.我喜欢这个.多少钱?(So beautiful.I like it.But how much is it?)

S:这个$500.如果你有VIP卡可以给你打个9折.(It's $500,and I can offer you a discount of 10% if you have a VIP card)

B:Oh!太贵了.(Oh,it is too expensive)

S:这是新上市的.女生都很喜欢它的设计,所以非常好卖.
您是要送给女朋友的吧? (It is our new arrival,and girls all like the design,so it sells well.Are you going to give it to your girlfriend?)

B:我要向女朋友求婚用. (Yes,it's for me to propose to my girlfriend)

S:Oh! 恭喜你.那这个戒指太适合你了.用它求婚100%成功.(Congratulations,sir.It is really suitable for you.Your girlfriend will accept it)

B:可是它真的太贵了.有没有更便宜的? (But it's really expensive for me.Any others cheaper?)

S:恩........那你看看这个.这个只要$50.(En...What about this one,sir?It is only $50)

B:恩.这个也不错.我就要这个吧.(Hm,it seems good.I'll take it)
能给我包起来吗? (Could you have it packed for me?)

S:当然.您还要看看别的东西吗?(Of course.Anything else?)

B:不用了. (No,thanks)

S:好的.请问您有会员卡吗? (Do you have a memembership card,please?)

B:没有. (No.)

S:那您是用现金结算还是信用卡结算?(Would you like to pay in cash or by credit card?)

B:信用卡. 给你.对了.请给我发票.(Credit card,please.Here's my credit card.And my receipt please?)

S:一共$50.这是您的戒指,信用卡和发票.您拿好.
您慢走.欢迎下次光临.再见.($50 in all,and here's your ring,credit card and receipt.Good-bye,sir)

B:再见.(Thank you and good-bye)
问题补充：谢绝用翻译工具直接粘贴的朋友....
请尽量语法正确一点...然后生活化口语化一点....
非常非常感谢....^^

(金店)
(jwlr.)

Salesperson:我能帮助你么?
S:Can I help you?

Boy:恩.我要看一个戒指.
B:yeah,I wanna see a ring.

S:看看这个钻石戒指.怎么样?
S:How about this diamond ring ?

B:哇.太美了.我喜欢这个.多少钱?
B:wow, so beautiful,I like it.How much?

S:这个$500.如果你有VIP卡可以给你打个9折.
S:It takes 500 dollars and you can be given a 10 percent discount with VIP card.

B:Oh!太贵了.
B:Oh!That's too expensive!

S:这是新上市的.女生都很喜欢它的设计,所以非常好卖.
您是要送给女朋友的吧?
S:It's a new model.Girls like its design so it sales well! Will you also give your girlfriend as a gift?

B:我要向女朋友求婚用.
B:I want to propose to her with it.

S:Oh! 恭喜你.那这个戒指太适合你了.用它求婚100%成功.
S:Oh!Congratulations.This ring really dose suit for you!You will success a hundred per cent .

B:可是它真的太贵了.有没有更便宜的?
B:But it costs too much, do you have anyone cheaper?

S:恩........那你看看这个.
这个只要$50.
S:Mmm, How about this one,it costs only 50 dollars.

B:恩.这个也不错.我就要这个吧.
能给我包起来吗?
B:Ok,this one looks not bad either, I'll take it.Can you pack it for me?

S:当然.您还要看看别的东西吗?
S:Sure. Any else do you want?

B:不用了.
B:No, thanks.

S:好的.请问您有会员卡吗?
S:Ok,Do you have an vip card?

B:没有.
B:no.

S:那您是用现金结算还是信用卡结算?

S: What can I do for you?
B: Well, I'm looking for a ring.
S: Have a look of this diamond ring, how do you like it?
B: Wow! It's fantastic! How much is it?
S; $500, but you'll get a 10% discount if you've got a VIP card.
B: Oh my! It's too dear.
S: It's a newly issued style, gets girls crazy, you know? You wanna buy it for your girl?
B: Yes, for propose a marriage to my girl friend.
(下班回家，未完待续
欲知后事如何，且听下回分解)