麻烦英语高手帮写一篇作文，高分回报

I'm ..., After graduating from a university in 2003, I went to a small town for an internship. The town had beautiful sceneries, and the children there were very pure and naive. I was such a man who always followed the trend of fashion, so after I arrived there I still kept my long hair. One day I found that all the boy students in my class kept long hair, so I asked them,"Don't you know that you shouldn't have long hair according to the students' regulations handbook?" They replied that, "we followed your example." Then I understood that as a teacher, you must be aware of your own appearance and behavior, which will definitely influence the life of the children that you teach.

坚决抵制语篇的机器翻译

My name is X. Afer graduating in 2003, I teached at a small village as an intern in X, where the landscape were splendid and beautiful and the students were innocent. As I used to be a teenager making a fetish of style, I kept my long hair as a preserved habit when I just stepped out of the campus.
One day, I surprisingly found some boys wearing long hair in my class, then I asked them,"Don't you know that according to your students' principles, boys with long hair are prohibited?" The answer they gave me impressed me quite a lot,"You used to wear long hair and we are just imitating you, sir." All of a sudden, I realized that we teachers must pay enough attention to our appearance as well as our behavior at all times, because every word we say or every gesture we make may leave a life-time effect to our students.
Since then, I began to focus on my behavior, bid farewell to long hair, do shaving everday and talk like a gentleman. As a response to my effort, the atmosphere in my class were significantly purified. At the same time, I won respect of both teachers and my students.
In 2004, I left that village and returned to X. On my leaving day, I was greatly touched by those students who were there sending me off, tears streaming out of their eyes.
Though I am now a professional teacher with 5-year education experience, I'll never forget that valuable lesson; on the contrary, I'll keep it in the rest of my life as a precious fortune.

题目是：工作后对我影响最大的一件事
我叫XXX，03年大学毕业，回到XX的一个小镇实习，那里风景秀丽，孩子们都很单纯。平时的我，比较喜欢追逐潮流，因此刚刚从学校出来我，还保存着学生的不羁，习惯留长发。
一天我发现班里的男生都留长发，我问：你们不知道学生手册规定男生不能留长发吗？他们说我们看到老师您留长发，我们也模范，然后我感悟，教师必须注重自己的外表和行为，因为教师的行为会影响孩子们的一生。

大概需要200个单词，上面的文字不一定要字字翻译，可适当修改，读起来顺口就好。。
感谢帮忙，先给50分，满意补150分。。
提问者： swallman - 高级经理 六级

I'm ..., After graduating from a university in 2003, I went to a small town for an internship. The town had beautiful sceneries, and the children there were very pure and naive. I was such a man who always followed the trend of fashion, so after I arrived there I still kept my long hair. One day I found that all the boy students in my class kept long hair, so I asked them,"Don't you know that you shouldn't have long hair according to the students' regulations handbook?" They replied that, "we followed your example." Then I understood that as a teacher, you must be aware of your own appearance and behavior, which will definitely influence the life of the children that you teach.
My name is X. Afer graduating in 2003, I teached at a small village as an intern in X, where the landscape were splendid and beautiful and the students were innocent. As I used to be a teenager making a fetish of style, I kept my long hair as a preserved habit when I just stepped out of the campus.
One day, I surprisingly found some boys wearing long hair in my class, then I asked them,"Don't you know that according to your students' principles, boys with long hair are prohibited?" The answer they gave me impressed me quite a lot,"You used to wear long hair and we are just imitating you, sir." All of a sudden, I realized that we teachers must pay enough attention to our appearance as well as our behavior at all times, because every word we say or every gesture we make may leave a life-time effect to our students.
Since then, I began to focus on my behavior, bid farewell to long hair, do shaving everday and talk like a gentleman. As a response to my effort, the atmosphere in my class were significantly purified. At the same time, I won respect of both teachers and my students.
In 2004, I left that village and returned to X. On my leaving day, I was greatly touched by those students who were there sending me off, tears streaming out of their eyes.
Though I am now a professional teacher with 5-year education experience, I'll never forget that valuable lesson; on the contrary, I'll keep it in the rest of my life as a precious fortune.