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     As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each
    1.It                                                              2. crowd
year.But because of the financial crisis,the situation of the employment has become
                                                                         3.  去掉
very serious. Consider this,some people suggest graduates should have a lower career
            4. Considering
expectation,such as working in the western areas of China. I∧ in favor of this idea.Firstly,
                                                                                        5. am
compared with the big cities,the competition is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy
                                                                                                 6. so                 7. easily
get a job.Secondly,the lower position may offer graduate more space.All in all,going to
                                                                      8. graduates
the west   bring more benefits.Devote yourself to the west,for it is both good for our
            9. brings                                                                                          10. your
personal development and for our country at present.