英语作文题，老师留了一篇作文作业。

1.在文中出现的拼写错误我就不指出了，自己检查一下。
2.建议把题目改为The reasons why I choose english as my major
3.At the first choose English as my major because it's my private interest;
At the secong,choose English as my major is my character;Choose English as my major is my private living
这三句想法是好的，但错误很多，（at first 不加the ，privite interest 是个人利益的意思，等等）帮你改一下这三句话。
一.At first english is my favourite subject in which I have a great interest.
二.I am gifted for english.
三.English is very useful in daily life.
4.希望按照着我的建议和给出的标题再从写一下。
建议你一上来不要使用比较复杂的复合句，最好使用单句或简单的并列句。而且只要把意思表达清楚到位就行，不要太过复杂，因为现在你还无法驾驭，要一步一步来。

private interest 的意思是 私人利益..

第一句话最好改成.

At first , i like to study english so i choose it as my major

或者 First of all , I'm interested in english so I choose it as my major .

Watching English movies is one of my favorite things .I hope i can understand what the movies talking about without seeing the caption.

Second, I like to make friends , especially foreigners ,i like to speak english with them .

At last , study english can improve my life in the future .

中间那一段我实在是不理解你到底想表达什么意思..大致也就改成这样了..

要注意 表示 1 2 3 的时候 最好是按我这样表达会比较好点..

还有你的中式英文的感觉很重.. 不要总是说 choose english 之类的话 适当的变动一下.. .例如 study english 之类的,

同样的词或句子 尽量不要在文中重复出现的次数过多..

中间哪一段我不知道你写的什么 .就按我自己大概理解的意思写了点...

慢用...