一篇英语作文，请帮我看下有没有什么错误。

拼写错误不是很多。一楼说得对，继母是stepmother,同父异母的姐妹叫stepsister.
其次，有些地方多余的我删除了；像两个one day的情况，我用remind...代替了，就说这个故事让我想起来这么一则新闻。
如有问题，欢迎给我发信息。

Yesterday I read a book named Cinderella. Cinderella is beautiful and kindhearted girl. She is also very clever. But her stepmother and stepsister don't like her .They even abuse Cinderella. They always order Cinderella to do much housework in a short time. One day Castle Prince issued an invitation to the girls: "Royal Palace will be open ball, and you must come". Cinderella had too much work to do so she couldn’t join in the Prince's ball. Luckily, an old lady helped her with magic. Finally, Cinderella and Prince got married. Since then they live happily.

As the Chinese saying goes, “goodness necessitates a sharing of itself, one good turn deserves another." It means we should be kind to the others. We should be kind and helpful as Cinderella, and we will live happily.

The story Cinderella reminds me of a piece of news: When an old lady crossed the road, she fell off. At that time, a taxi driver took her to the hospital. The old lady was very deeply moved. I think the driver is helpful and kind-hearted. He is our example.

The story brings me a lot of affections and enlightenment. I will remember this wonderful fairy tale.

继母是stepmother，不是new mother

这是一篇文章吗？怎麽像是2篇，还有2个One day．

1. housework 为不可数名词，其前应用 much 修饰
2. invite 此处应为现在分词作状语，应用 inviting
3. work 也是不可数名词，其前应用 much
4. can't 时态应与前面一致 改为 couldn't
5. fell 之后用逗号
6. goodness 应该为 kind-hearted
7. bring 应为三单

我看了一下，没有什么错误