帮我翻译几个句子，高分

你逻辑有点不太清楚，我给你按照英语的习惯，重新编辑了下顺序。不然人家以为你逻辑不清晰。
我的家乡是永康，它位于浙江省的中部。在我的家乡，环境很优美。这里最著名的是五金器具。在中国，它被有着很高的知名度并被认为是“五金之都”。每年，这里生产出大量的产品，很多被出口到国外。
My hometown is Yongkang which located in middle of Zhejiang Province.
In my hometown, the environment is very beautiful. The most famous are metal hardware in there，it has the high reputation and was looked as The City of Hardware in China. The manufacture is prosper. Every year, a lot of products are made and exported to abroad.

最后一句我建议你别加了，看你也是做生意的，那句没必要。但我依然给你贴上，但不建议你用上这句。
There is a movie(英国用movie,美国人你用cinema) base, dozens wonderful movies are made in there ever year.

补充下，除了我这个，
把爱留给孩子
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这2个人翻译的都很地道，尤其是“把爱留给孩子”，用词很生动。
至于2楼，那个是看单词书的，估计是研究生吧，词汇大，但不精确。

my hometown is yongkang,in the central of zhejiang.what the most famous here are hardwares.it has a name called the city of hardware.my hometown is particular in developing the manufactory,and manufactory a lot of products,quite a number of which is transported to the oversea.my home is very beautiful where there is a movie base,and some movies will be filmed here

My hometown,Yongkang,located in the middle of Zhejiang province,is most famous for hardware and so wins a name of "the city of hardware". Manufactoring industry is developed very well here, many products are produced and most of them are exported to foreign countries. My hometown is very beautiful, where there is a film and television base and movies are produced every year.

My hometown is Yongkang, Zhejiang central. Here is the most well-known hardware, there are the good name of the hardware. Here in particular the developed manufacturing, production of many products, a large part of it is exported to foreign countries. Beautiful my hometown, there is a film base, every year shooting the film here.

my hometown, known as Yongkang, is situated in Central Zhejiang Province, which is most renowned for its hardware. moreover, it is also dubbed the city of hardware. the manufacturing industry is especially advanced here with plenty of products being exported. my hometown is a glamorous place owning a movie and drama center where several movies and TV dramas are produced every year.

一楼的机翻！