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随着我国改革开放的深入和市场经济进程的加快，民营企业已逐步发展成为促进国民经济持续快速增长的一支不可替代的重要力量。而浙江民营经济的发展有目共睹，也是近年来浙江成为经济强省的重要因素，而其发展很大程度上得益于浙江政府在机制上、集群产业上、人才培养上、科技投入上对民营企业全方位的支持。在体制方面的先发优势逐步弱化和全球化竞争加剧的背景下,当务之急是培养民营企业的创新发展能力。

改革开放Reform & opening up
市场经济 Marketing Economy
民营企业Private Enterprises
国民经济national economy
民营经济 Nongovernmental economy
全球化竞争 Global competition
有目共睹的obvious to all
很大程度上To much extent

Along with China's going deep into Reform & opening-up and the acceleration of our marketing ecnomy, private enterprises have being become an important irreplaceable power accelerating the continual development of national economy gradually. In Zhejiang Province, the development of nongovernmental economy is obvious to all, it is also an important factor for Zhejiang Province being an ecnomical powerful Province. To much extent, their development profits omnidirectional supports from Zhejiang government including policys, group bussiness, personel training, technical devotion etc. Under the situation of declining of anticipative advantage of systems and the upgrading of global competition, it's urgent to bring up the creative ability of the private enterprises.

原文翻译为：
Along with the deepening of China's reform, opening up and speed up the process of the market economy, private enterprise has gradually developed into an important force in China's economic development, and sustained rapid growth in China will play an irreplaceable role. Zhejiang and the development of the private economy is obvious to all, the development of the private economy is a strong economy in recent years Zhejiang important factors. And the development of private enterprises, and to a large extent from Zhejiang province in mechanism, in cluster industries, in personnel training, and scientific and technological input of private enterprises in all-round support. Camp has become the Zhejiang economic growth and an important force for social progress. In the first institutional superiority gradually weakening and intensification of competition in the context of globalization, it is imperative that the innovation and development of private enterprise training capacity.

Along with the deepening of China's reform, opening up and speed up the process of the market economy, private enterprise has gradually developed into an important force in China's economic development, and sustained rapid growth in China will play an irreplaceable role. Zhejiang and the development of the private economy is obvious to all, the development of the private economy is a strong economy in recent years Zhejiang important factors. And the development of private enterprises, and to a large extent from Zhejiang province in mechanism, in cluster industries, in personnel training, and scientific and technological input of private enterprises in all-round support. Camp has become the Zhejiang economic growth and an important force for social progress. In the first institutional superiority gradually weakening and intensification of competition in the context of globalization, it is imperative that the innovation and development of private enterprise training capacity

Along with the deepening of China's reform, opening up and speed up the process of the market economy, private enterprise has gradually developed into an important force in China's economic development, and sustained rapid growth in China will play an irreplaceable role. Zhejiang and the development of the private economy is obvious to all, the development of the private economy is a strong economy in recent years Zhejiang important factors. And the development of private enterprises, and to a large extent from Zhejiang province in mechanism, in cluster industries, in personnel training, and scientific and technological input of private enterprises in all-round support. Camp has become the Zhejiang economic growth and an important force for social progress. In the first institutional superiority gradually weakening and intensification of competition in the context of globalization, it is imperative that the innovation and development of private enterprise training capacity.

Together with the deepening of China's Reform and Open Policy and speeding of the market economy processing, private enterprises have developed into an important force in China's economic development gradually, and sustained rapid and continuous growth in China, and it plays an irreplaceable role. The development of the private economy in Zhejiang is obvious to us all, the development of the private enterprises is a important facto in building strong economy in Zhejiang in recent years. And the development of private enterprises and to a large extent from Zhejiang province in mechanism, in cluster industries, in personnel training, and scientific and technological input of private enterprises in all-round support. Camp has become the Zhejiang economic growth and an important force for social progress. In the first institutional superiority gradually weakening and intensification of competition in the context of globalization, At present, the most needed is to train the innovating and developing ability of private enterprises.

Reform along with the our country to open thorough to is quickly with market economy progress, the run by private capital develops already and gradually the Chinese economy that become an important power develops, in strongly national economy kept on fleetness increase the function that have to can't act for.But the economic development in the province run by private capital of Zhejiang is obvious to all, the economic development in run by private capital is Zhejiang to become the important factor of the economic strong province in recent years.But the development of its run by private capital, receive benefit on the again very big degree in the province of Zhejiang on the mechanism, in gathering a group of industries, the support that is all-directions to the run by private capital in talented person educating and in technology throwing in.The camp economy has become the province economy of Zhejiang increase with the important power that society progresses.In the system first the hair advantage weakens gradually to turn worse with the world competition of turning the background next, the urgent matter of the moment is a creative development to educates run by private capital ability.

Because the our country reform open of thorough with the market economy progress quickly, the run by private capital has already developped to become an important strength that the Chinese economy develop gradually, having the function that can't act for in the strong national economy keep on quickly the growth.But the development of province run by private capital in Zhejiang economy is obvious to all, the development of the run by private capital economy is the important factor that Zhejiang becomes economic strong province in recent years.But the development of its run by private capital, again the very great degree is receive benefit in province in Zhejiang up to develop on the mechanism,on gathering a group of industries and at the talented person up,throw in in science and technology up to run by private capital all-directions support.The run by private capital economy has become the province economy in Zhejiang growth and social progressive important strength.Delivers advantage first to weaken the background that turns worse with the globalization competition gradually in the system under, the urgent matter of the moment is the creative development ability that develops run by private capital.

With the rapid development of China’s Reform and Opening Up, the private enterprises in China
, which has been greatly promoted the national economy of China, have gradually been an indispensable constituent of the Chinese economy. And the private enterprises of Zhejiang Province are especially conspicuous. Actually, it is an efficient ingredient which impulses Zhejiang to be one of the richest provinces of China. From many aspects, system support, group industries foundation, specialist education, science and technology input, the government of Zhejiang has helped to develop the private enterprises. Now the private enterprises are promoting the economic growth and social uplift of Zhejiang. However, the system superiority is abating and the global competition is enhancing. Under this background, our chief task is to foster the innovation ability of the private enterprises.

Along with China's going deep into Reform & opening-up and the acceleration of our marketing ecnomy, private enterprises have being become an important irreplaceable power accelerating the continual development of national economy gradually. In Zhejiang Province, the development of nongovernmental economy is obvious to all, it is also an important factor for Zhejiang Province being an ecnomical powerful Province. To much extent, their development profits omnidirectional supports from Zhejiang government including policys, group bussiness, personel training, technical devotion etc. Under the situation of declining of anticipative advantage of systems and the upgrading of global competition, it's urgent to bring up the creative ability of the private enterprises.

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Because the our country reform open of thorough with the market economy progress quickly, the run by private capital has already developped to become an important strength that the Chinese economy develop gradually, having the function that can't act for in the strong national economy keep on quickly the growth.But the development of province run by private capital in Zhejiang economy is obvious to all, the development of the run by private capital economy is the important factor that Zhejiang becomes economic strong province in recent years.But the development of its run by private capital, again the very great degree is receive benefit in province in Zhejiang up to develop on the mechanism,on gathering a group of industries and at the talented person up,throw in in science and technology up to run by private capital all-directions support.The run by private capital economy has become the province economy in Zhejiang growth and social progressive important strength.Delivers advantage first to weaken the background that turns worse with the globalization competition gradually in the system under, the urgent matter of the moment is the creative development ability that develops run by private capital.