请帮忙看看以下的英文句子有没有错⼀ 如何表达得更好?

2025-02-03 05:00:17
推荐回答(2个)
回答1:

把eyes改成eyes',这是名词所有格。
把too much 改成intentionally,这个词表示的是“刻意地”,而too much 意思是“非常”
后面改成thought that l would have the likelihood of suffering from eye problems some day.其中eye problems 是固定搭配。

回答2:

I have not pay much attention on the health of my eyes and never thought of i would suffer from any eyes' diseases in the future