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google 自动翻译后，经过修改如下

On that day
May 12, 2008
And as usual
Sky was quiet
Leaf was quiet
Street was quiet
All the things went quietly

Suddenly
All shaking
The mountains started shaking, the earth quaked
The brutal forces of nature
Attacked millions of towns ,all of a sudden
This horrible disaster fell on the Land of Abundance
(这不知道，自动翻译的)
In the middle of China

An elderly old
Apeared at once
He stood in front of the ruins
He stood in the drizzling rain
Then
He said:
"As long as there is glimmer of hope,
we will have to use 100 times the efforts "
He was unable to curb the inner feelings
Witn bitter tears falling down

Salute,to the Prime Minister of the Republic
Everyone cried in your tears
Salute,to the people's Prime Minister
No matter what disaster it is, we will follow you

We are all Chinese
We are sons of 华夏
此处不知
We have the Party's wise leadership
We have the close family ties

Wenchuan, do not cry
After the misfortune
You will not be alone
Our relatives in all directions
Wiped away tears ,(挺起胸膛)

Look
A rainbow appeared
God bless Wenchuan
Tomorrow will certainly be more beautiful
God bless China
Tomorrow will certainly be better

以前没翻译过，可能有些口语化
我感觉总体还可以，不过还需修改
有些地方时态还不对

The wenchuan requiem
that one day
on May 12, 2008
and was same the sky
was in the past the peaceful
leaf is the peaceful
street is peaceful
all is the peaceful
landslide
cracks in the earth earth movement
mountain swings the nature
the barbaric strength unexpected
to attack a place small town village
unprecedented disaster suddenly to arrive the land of abundance to arrive
surely a Chinese
past sixty years of age old person
travel-worn to catch up with
him to stand on the caving in ruins
he stands in the continuous drizzle
he said that,“So long as has a ray of hope, we must use hundred time of endeavors”
he to be finally not in control the innermost feelings emotion
to flow off the bitter tears
salute, republic premier
your sob let us have tears streaming down the face
the salute, people's premier
the big disaster, we are the Chinese people
we are the dragon
teach other people we with your
us to have the party wisely to lead
us to have the blood is thicker than water dear ones
wenchuan, will not cry
the disaster which will break up a family you
not to be from now on lonely we
the family member to dry the tears
to stick out chest in all directions
looked
the horizon will appear the rainbow
day to bless the wenchuan
a certainly safer day
to bless China certainly
to be tomorrow happier tomorrow

Wenchuan requiem that one day of the 2008 year on May 12 and was the same the sky was in the past peaceful the leaf is peaceful the street is peaceful is peaceful landslide cracks in the earth the earth movement mountain swings nature barbaric strength to attack thousands of place small town village suddenly a unprecedented disaster to arrive at land of abundance unexpected to arrive at Chinese past sixty years of age Mr. to catch up with he to stand travel-worn on the collapsing ruins he stands inIn the continuous drizzle he said: “so long as has a ray of hope, we must use hundred time of endeavors” he not to be able to suppress the innermost feelings emotion to flow off bitter tears finally the salute, Republic Premier your sob let us have tears streaming down the face the salute, people's Premier the big disaster, we we are Chinese people we are the dragon teach other people with your we to have party wise leadership we to have blood is thicker than water dear ones the Wenchuan, will not cry the disaster which will break up a family from now on you not lonely our family member dries the tears to stick out chest in all directions to look that the horizon will present rainbow the day to bless Wenchuan certainly safer the day to bless Chinese tomorrow tomorrow certainly happier the request: 1st, the word is easy to understand, not uncommon 2, in non-grammatical error 3, Chinese exquisite words and expressions (for example: Unexpected and so on) may use the synonym to replace or the abbreviation