英语书面表达“假如你是李华，最近你的美国笔友（Jerry）来信说他的一个室友经常听音乐到深夜，导致

Dear Jerry,
I'm sorry to hear that you can't sleep well because of your roomate's behavior that he often listens to music at dead of night.In my opinion,communication is play an important part in our life.
Only you tell him what you think about it do he will realize his mistake.To begin with,you should not only be brave to talk with him but also try to let him make sense of you.Then you discuss with him on how to deal with it and both of you two should obey the rules drawed.
Looking forward to your good news.
yours sincerely,
Li Hua
不知道有没有语法错误的 单词也有可能会打错 打英文的感觉跟写英文的感觉很不一样 希望可以给分

你必须告诉杰里，沟通是非常重要的，试图找到他的室友多交流，可能没有意识到，他的室友给别人带来了麻烦，这个时候就需要一些用心良苦的提醒，结果可能不是你自己不好说困难，并给他说明他们需要早点休息的理由，顺便给他一些建议，用耳机听音乐，我相信，通过有效的沟通，可以解决任何问题