夏日下雷阵雨 求一篇英语写景作文

It was summer time,the temperature rose up extremely high.no one would stand the firy heat.
In the afternoon,the dark clouds slowly moved toward where I was living.The clouds grew darker and darker,like dark choclate.And all of a sudden,rain went pouring down as a buket of water,washing the roads as clear as it has been cleaned,and washing the hotness of summer away.Rain,dancing in th air,using its magic,making the grasses greener,flowers were showing its colouiful outfits.Everything in the world seems to be enjoying this pouring rain in the hot-burning summer time.
就这样吧，我写的已经挺好的了 [求采纳