英语!英语作文问题.这是暑假作业,我写了几篇.希望大家能帮我指导与修改一下

第一段第二句 可以改成 very pleased to introduce my mother/native language Chines to you 或者 introduce you my mother/native language Chinese; pleased 也可以用pleased and honored 不过你用pleased完全没问题

第二段里的populous language 改成popular language
but also it's one of . . . . 改成 but also one of the working languages . . .

one billion people后面有 ","和"." 随便选一个就行因为你后面用的是so

grammar . . . . is formal and standard 意思我明白 不过你看看这么写怎么样: The grammar of written Chinese has strict rules. Written Chinese is very formal and there is always some stadard forms.

China economy 改成 Chinese's economy
an increasing number of people . . . 改成 the number of people who begin to learn Chinese is increasing on a worldwide basis

attract 改成 attracts
建议people 后加 from
【Chinese is the world's most populous use of the language.】
【汉语是世界上使用人口最多的语言之一。】
mandarin 普通话建议改成 这个词

第五行，popular
第六行，one of the working
其他都挺不错的！
希望帮到你

1. introduce 后面to 去掉

2. populous改popular

3. but also后面的its去掉

4. almost改over中国早过十亿人了

大概就是这些了，好像再没什么大问题。。