(高分)英语高手请进,自我介绍,急用.谢谢.!

Good afternoon teachers,my name is ** ,and I am a student of Class 14 Grade 3 of ** High School.Time flies,three years has gone,but I would never forget anything during that time.And I was no longer the one that did not understand English at all.I have found that now I love English!And all these changes are because of my teacher Mr Hu--a very humorous teacher.I feel happy and enjoy mysely in his class,at the same time ,all my classmates love him.So now I have a strong will to learn English so that I can speak fluent English like him in the future.
首先申明不是机器翻译。按你的题目来看，你的英语应该不是很厉害，所以没有用很深的语法。花了我不少时间。

Teachers are good afternoon, I called × ×, is the third year from × × 14 classes of secondary school students. Guangyinsijian, 2003 the time has ended, but the little Didi which I will never forget, I was no longer completely in the past that I do not understand English, I found that I like the English. Because of my English teachers - teachers Hu is a very humorous teacher, he's the lesson I feel very happy, students are very like him. Therefore, I would like to learn English well, after that, as he said as fluent in English ..

Good afternoon!My name is xx,a student of class 14,senior 3,xx middle school.How time flies!Three years of time has passed,but I will always remember every little bit of it.At last,I'm no longer that person who knows nothing about English at all.On the contrary,I find that I like English very much.That is all because my English teacher,Mr Hu,is a very humorous teacher.Having his classes is of great joy to me and all my classmates.So I've decided that I must work hard and learn English well so as to speak English as fluently as he does in the future.

Dear Sirs, good afternoon! My name is XX, and I came from Class 14 in the third year of upper XX middle school. Time flew, three years had gone past, but I will never forget any little thing that has happened during that time. I am no longer that person who does not know anything about English. I found that I now have a passion for English and am enthusiastic about it. This is because my English teacher, teacher Hu is a very humourous teacher. I am always very happy in his lessons and very much enjoy them, all of my classmates like him as well. Therefore, I want to learn good English, and wish to be as fluent as him in the future.

但愿这个可以帮上忙吧~~~~我在英国呆了5年了~~~汗汗，话说，在这边，我们都管老师叫Miss，Sir之类的，不过我翻译的时候用了teacher，感觉国内还是这样叫老师的吧？呵呵~~~保证是自己翻译的啦。。。。有些是比较口语话的，不知道你是要正式一点的还是就是口语话的就OK呢？？

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楼上这个你在英国5年怎么说得满篇都是语法错误啊？
看看这么多毛病十足的“翻译”我实在是无话可说，就你们这错字连篇还要去教人家高三的孩子，太不知高低了吧？