求哪位英语达人帮忙翻译下自我介绍！万分感谢

Let me introduce myself . my name is Rony . I'm from Shanghai in China.
I have been studied for 5 years in Korea . At first I can't understand Korean,then i was awful.
The pressure made me learn Korean at full split .I listened to the news and imitate the moderator speaking.
I got the certificate of topik Korean level 6 two years ago finally . Now I think my Korean is much better than my English.
I will graduate in August this year .I want to continue to challenge myself . From the introdution of the home page of XX university and professor XXX,I think XXX research is a very good choice.
I am ready to enter the laboratoryand begins at the beginning,I have confidence in my ability to learn,such as learning Korean.
I am active and resilient, I have strong team spirit .but sometimes I'm too demanding ,too sensitive and the lack of flexibility, I think this is what I need to strengthen.
When I learned from professor XXX that most classes at the computer technology are taught in English. I think it is so wonderful and it means a storm for me .I like to challenge myself under high pressure.
I sincerely hope you can give me this opportunity.
I promise that I will try my best for the development of the lab and myself.

我自己逐字逐句翻译的，绝对是手动翻译。望采纳。

Let me introduce, my name is rony from Shanghai, China. I came to Korea to learn has been five years, I just started a Korean would not, at that time the situation was a mess, so I desperately pressure learn Korean, listen to the news, imitation moderator speak, two years ago, I finally got the topik Korean six certificates, I think I now Korean is much better than my English bar. August this year I'm going to graduate, I want to continue to challenge themselves through the home page and XXX XX university professor introduction, I think XXX Labs is a very good choice, I have to do to enter the laboratory prepared to learn from scratch, and I for confidence in their ability to learn, like learning Korean way. My personality is cheerful, resilience, team spirit is very prominent, but it also led Sometimes I do too harsh, too sensitive, lack of flexibility, I think this is what I need to be strengthened, when I professor from XXX computer Engineering learned that most of the lectures are in English, I think it is great, this is simply a storm for me, I like to challenge myself under pressure. Real hope to give me the chance, I promise to my personal research and development, and I will do everything

Let me introduce myself, my name is Rony from Shanghai china. I came to Korea to study for 5 years, I started a Korean won't, then it was awful, the pressure that I desperately to learn Korean, listening to the news, imitate the moderator speak, finally in 2 years ago, I got the TOPIK Korean level 6 certificate, I think I now is much better than the Korean my English. In August of this year I will graduate, I want to challenge myself, by the University of XX homepage and Professor XXX, I think XXX lab is a very good choice, I also do a good job in research from the beginning study of preparation, I have confidence in their ability to learn, like to learn Korean. My character more cheerful, adaptability is strong, the team consciousness is very outstanding, but it also cause sometimes I do too harsh, too sensitive, lack of flexibility, I think this is I needs to strengthen, as I learned from Professor XXX computer engineering teaching are most of the Yong Ying language, I think it really is great, this is for me a storm, I like to challenge myself under high pressure. Sincerely hope you can give me this opportunity, I promise to study room and my personal development, I will do my best

Let me introduce myself, my name is Rony from Shanghai, China.I came to Korea for 5 years, first a word of Korean, it does not, then sucks, the pressure made me desperate to learn Korean, listen to the news, talking to imitate the Facilitator, in 2 years ago, I finally got the Topik Korean 6-level certificate, I think I'm Korean English better than I do a lot of it.In August of this year I'm going to graduate, I want to continue to challenge themselves, through the introduction of home pages and XXX at XX University Professor, laboratory of I think XXX is a very good choice, I prepared to enter the laboratory preparation of from a, b, c, I have great confidence in their ability to learn, like learn Korean.I of character comparison cheerful, adaptation force is strong, team consciousness is highlight, but this also led to sometimes I on things too had demanding, too sensitive, missing flexibility, I think this is I needs strengthening of, dang I from XXX Professor that learned that computer workers learn most taught are is with English of when, I think that is is too Rod has, this was is on I of one storm, I like in high pressure Xia challenge themselves.Real hope for this opportunity, in order to research and the development of personal, I promise, I will do everything I can
望能采纳

Hello,My name is rony.l come from Shanghai.l study in