初一英语作文。急急急！！

Dear MS.weit

I am Zhouchen.I am one student of yours .I like your class very much .so I Iike you very much.
When I heard this ,I was very glad.I think you are right .You have treated us as you friends.
I will help you. I will tell you the climate here .In wenter ,it is very cold ,so you must bring your thick clothes.But in summer ,it is very hot ,so you may bring thin clothes here .
I wish you have a good time .
Your sincerely

zhouchen

Dear Miss West,
　　Welcome to Beijing and welcome to our school. My name is Wang Lin. I'm
in Class 4,Grade 8. You will come to Beijing in August,2013 ,won't you? You
asked me in your letter about the    weather in Beijing. So let me tell you
something about the weather here. When you arrive in Beijing,it will be winter.
Winter lasts from December to February. It will still very cold when you get
here,so you need to bring some warm clothes with you.
I look forward to meeting you.楼主，参考下吧。。因为你要求不，麻烦核对下。。

Hello, MS,Weit. I am Zhouchen,one of your classmates. I am glad to hear that you will come to China in August. Welcome to our country ! Now I would like to tell you something about the climate here. In August, it is very hot so shirt and short pants are needed. In September and October it is a little cool in morning and evening so sweaters are needed. In November and December it is very cold here so you need to take overcoats . The climate here is different from month to month so you need to take different clothes. I hope that you can have a good time in China. I am looking forward to seeing you soon !
Yours.
Zhouchen.