主要是最先的一句需要修改:化交流中是 cultural exchanges 英美这里要用 Britain and America 两个国家是 between 不是 among。其馀只有少许错漏,下面是得给你的更正版:
In the cultural exchanges between the two countries of Britain and America, Pearl Buck was regarded as a widespread and influential writer. A gril, who was born in West Virginia's Hillboro and was taken to Jaingsu, China by her missionary parents when she was only 4 months old, where she spent her childhood and youth. After she had received the higher education in the USA, she went back to China to teach and write books in Anhui and Nanjing. Ann Lee, who was rew up in a traditional Chinese decent family, is another person had the similar experience as her. However, as a normal director, it is not easy to express the western film language with the eastern values. Just due to their existence, a unique literary landscape was created, which enables the Chinese and western cultures live in harmony.