The moment I saw you, I was deeply attracted by the innocence of your smile. It is the grestest pleasure in my life to be able to meet you. You are a nice girl, perfect in every way. I know that I don't deserve to be with you, but I don't want it to end this way. I am not sweet or romantic. But what's important is that I am willing to go through all the hardships in life with you. I may not be able to fulfill your dreams, but I will do me best to persuit them with you. All that I am expecting from you is some room in your heart. Do I deserve such a chance?
兄弟 你是追西方女孩吗?要多拿出点自信才行啊。在这方面文化上的差异很大。很多话咱们听着可能很有感觉 但要是译过去会觉得很奇怪 比如那句“只有一颗想陪你相依到老的心” 要是直译后对一个西方女孩说 她会觉得你是个疯子变态。。。除非你是在求婚。 加油吧!
I was attracted by the pure smile on you face at the first sight. Knowing you, is the greatest pleasure in my life. You are a good girl, and to me, you are one perfect lady. Although it seems you are unreachable, but the love in my heart wouldn't let me go quiet in the night. I don't know how to make my words charm, and romance is never a part of me. All I have is only a heart that is willing to accompany you till the end of my life. I believe you have dreams, and I know I'm not the one who can make it true, but I'll do all my best to make it close. I have dream, too. In my dream you are the girl on my side. I know it's only a dream, but please, please know that there is always a shoulder you can cry on.
没有按照你的原文翻,英语里的表达习惯和中文不太一样,意思大致差不多。祝好运 !
The first time I saw you attracted to you that pure smile deep, knowing you is my greatest honor in this life, you are a good girl, is perfect, I know I don't deserve you, but I don't want this to end, I'm clumsy of speech does not speak sugared words, nor romantic, only one want to accompany you to the old heart, you imagine happiness I can not meet you, but I'll do my best, I didn't expect too much of you, please leave me a spare wheel position, in the heart can be?
First times see you on is you that pure of laugh deep of attract, to awareness you is I this life maximum of honored, you is a good girl, called perfect, I know I enjoy not Shang you, but I didn't want to on such end, I this people who has not not sweet, also not aesthetic of romantic, only a one wanted to accompany you dependent to old of heart, you imagine in the of happiness I may meet can't you, but I must tried to do best, on you I no too large of luxury, please you in heart to I left a preparation tire of location,