求英语大神

Hello My lovely neighbours,
It's a pleasure to live with you two in the same building. Now please allow me to make a complaint from me and others, holp you don't mind.
We noticed that you like parties and often have parties at home. However, the music on your parties are way too loud, which make us very uncomforable. In addition, your guests park their cars in restricted area. Your pet dogs barked all the time and that's annoying. Please make some
change in the future and make this place more suitable to live.

Thanks and Best Regards
Yours XXX

Mr&Ms:
im Lee hua,who live downstair of yours.Frist,these days i cant fall asleep very well coz you always held party in the night and the music is really aloud, thats not good. it greatly make effect on me.I know its happy to hold a party in the night with friends but can you please turn down the music a little bit? Thanks. Secondly,you must raise a pet,right?the little dog always woof when you went out for work,thats really annoying! i hope that you can make he placeful and calm down,ok?Finally,what i have to point out is paking your car. science you park your car in very bad order,i cant park my car in right place,so do our neighbors.so please park your car in order and obey the rule of our block,thanks a lot.
Lee Hua

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