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My favourite city is Shanghai, which is one of the biggest cities in the world. Shanghai is a modern city, and it’s also my hometown. There are many places of interest in Shanghai, such as the Bund,Yu Garden and Nanjing Road.
Tourists can enjoy shopping in Shanghai, and having local snacks as well. The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huang pu River. As you can see, Shanghai is such a great city that I love it so much.
我最喜欢的城市是上海,它是世界上最大的城市之一。上海是一个现代化的城市,它也是我的家乡。上海有许多名胜古迹,如外滩、豫园和南京路。
游客可以在上海购物,还可以吃到当地小吃。上海的夜景棒极了,你可以观赏美丽的灯光,你也可以乘渡船游览黄浦江。正如你所看到的,上海是一个伟大的城市,我非常喜欢它。
My favorrite city
I am Candy,My parents and I live in GuangZhou.That's is a big and beatiuful city in China.And Guangzhou is my fovourite city.
In spring,I can go to BaiYun Mountain with my friends. We fly kites togher.In summer,I go to the ChangLong swim with my parents.In fall,I study with my classmates.In winter,I can eat some food in GuangZhou.
This is my favourite city - GuangZhou.
If you ask me which city is my favourite, I would definatley answer you Hawaii. The weather there entice me most and gives me impulse hoping to visit there. Sunshine on the beach is what Hawaii is famous for. Most couples arrive there for vacation, leisure and for a romantic honeymoon. In addition, people and citizens there do not have much pressure, not only on work but in daily lives. I would love to visit Hawaii, because of the environement there, the people, community...
My favourite city
There are many great cities in Asia,sush as Tokyo,Bangkok andLos Angeles and so on.And my favourite city is Shanghai.
Shanghai is one of the biggest city in China.There are about 23,000,000 people in Shanghai.So I think Shanghai is a very big city. Every year,there are millions of tourists travel to Shanghai.They like shopping in Shanghai.There are many big supermarket in Shanghai.There are many beautuiful and famous places in Shanghai too.I think the Bund is the most beautiful place in Shanghai. We can look at Huangpu River,Oriental Pearl TV Tower andJin Mao Tower.
Do you love Shanghai?