请大家帮我看一下这篇英语作文,可能有什么错误的地方

2025-02-01 16:56:06
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改过的作文如下:
my plan
my parents and I will go to Australia. We can see many beautiful budings in Australia if the weather is good.I will enjoy the sun when I go to the beach.And i will go swimming.There are fish playing games with me.I like Australia best.I will make friends with people from different countries .I may feel so happy. I hope that I will have a good time.