急求一个高中英语作文关于，学校对学生采取封闭式管理学生看法不一的（不能逐句翻译！

It is well-known that some schools nowadays uses closed-off management to manage their students.About this phenomenon,different people have different opinions.
Some students think that schools use this method to limit their freedom,and result in they have less contacts with society.they also think they can't develop their own hobbies sufficiently,so they don't approve this kind of management.But others think that school is a place where you learn things,students should spend their whole attention on study.Students are lack of conscious,they need teachers to take care of them,both physically and spiritually.
In my opinion,closed-off management is good for students,because they need to focus on studying,and their age depends that they can't resist all kinds of allurs in society,they can be easily influenced by them.So adults like parents and teacher shloud give them a simple environment for them to grow up.So,I think closed-off management is a good and effctive way to raise children right.

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