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This Sunday is aspecial day.
today id sunday.lt ls a special day .because today is susan's birthday.
we dress up as a birthday's old man and wear black glasses. some people paint their faces,
ln the enening,we sing the "happy birthday to you''song.the birthday's old man give him present.and people dance''birthday dance''.
then we eat cakes.paint cake susan's face.he looks a ghost.
go back home.

This sunday is a special day, it is Susan's sweet sixteen! In commeration of this event, I have prepared an event. I bought a new game about outer space for my space obessed friend. It is about an astronaut's experience in space. he files a rocket into outer space and lands on an uninhabited planet suspected to contain signs of sustaining life. The lifelike graphics are sure to attract Susan's attention and give her the illusion of being the astronaut. She would indirectly experience the floating sensation of low gravity and also learn how a spacesuit allows the astronaut to breathe. We will play the game at her party and Susan will thank me. We will be having a sleepover and then we'll go back home.

　　 This Sunday is aspecial day.
This Sunday is Susan's Birthday, I am going hold a birthday for her. The following is my plan.
1. Monday: Invite the friends come to join the Birthday party, and talk about for the performance for Susan.
2. Tuesday: Go shopping to choose a gift for Susan
3. Wednesdy: Go shopping to buy the adornment and foods for the party
4. Thursday: Book a birthday cake for Susan
5. Friday: Layout the party place
7. Saturday: Dry run the performance and send the invitaion to Susan
8. Sunday: Hold the pary for Susan and then we'll go back home.