急,请高人帮我翻译一下,谢谢了

2024-12-16 09:47:01

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回答1：

My teacher's feedback to me is really very important, it let me know where is the weaknesses of my writing. From the first article's feedback that my tearcher gives me i can tell that rightnow my writing has three problems. First: the lack of topic sentence in paragraphs of each article so that readers do not know the intention of the article. Second: between sentence and the sentence there are no linking words, at the same time i'm not good at using very complex sentence shapes, resulting in every sentence in my article becomes short. Third: there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. How to avoid these problems in the future in Writing, I think I need to strengthen the learning of grammar, as well as to practice a lot to use some of the more complex sentences. If I write aricles in the future, I will pay special attention to these points.

是我修改了google的机翻以后自己翻的我是北外的专业方面没问题你可以放心

回答2：

厉害

回答3：

FEEDBACK teacher to me is really very important, it let me know my writing where the weaknesses. From the teachers back to my first article can be seen in the feedback, I am now writing mainly in three aspects. First: paragraphs of each article, the lack of TOPIC SENTENCE so that readers do not know the intention of the article. Second: between sentence and the sentence did not linking words, at the same time will not be a very complex sentence shape, resulting in a very short sentence. Third: there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. How to avoid these problems in the future in Writing, I think we need to strengthen the learning grammar, as well as to practice a lot to use some of the more complex sentences. Writing in the future, I will pay special attention to these points.

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