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Good afternoon guys, today I’m going to present about the relationships between insurance and nation’s health care and how they impact on economy.
Along with the rapid development of people’s living standard, people have to face various pressures from all aspects, such as： work pressure, family pressure, and finance pressure and so forth, therefore people do not have enough time for entertaining or sports due to a highly competitive society. Finally, when some people fall sick, the medical expenses would be huge. And how to keep the cost of medical accident to the minimum?

(* As a large number of people spend money on their health stuff, such as health insurance in order to cover huge costs from medical accident, in this case, the demand for health insurance is increasing, so that the supply also increasing, but the price has to go up, because on one side, the more people need health insurance the more economic benefit suppliers will get, on the other hand, more risks are coming up, if the price remains unchanged, once the rate of dying in the medical accident has increased, the insurance company could face a huge loss. *)
sorry.,can't understand what you are trying to say....

第二行 去掉 do
第三行去掉 along
第六行 For making the cost of medical accident to the minimum有问题
第七行 health stuff用 health care 比较好
最后一行 has increased用 increase比较好 could用will 比较好

how do they impact on economy去掉do
整个文章有点乱，我看不天明白你想要表达的意思
而且句子之间的标点用的也存在问题，
可以吧你想要表达的中文意思发过来吗