请帮忙看一下这个句子有没有语法错误。

语法还看不出有什么错误，不过里头的access，用approach 会比较恰当吧？？虽然两者有相同的意思，不过在这里好像不能交替使用。

没有什么错误。推荐答案只是加了个however，其实没必要。

Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to people as getting along better in life.In order to accomplish this goal,someone points out that living in a small town is possible access. However,when it comes to me,I take sides with the point that living in cosmopolis definitely makes it easier access to enjoying ourselves better in life.Three indisputable reasons are raised from this perspective