●翻译了一首歌成英文，大家来挑错，挑出最多的给分

2025-03-05 19:19:11

推荐回答（6个）

回答1：

沿着路灯一个人走回家 walk home alone, down the street lights
和老朋友打电话 make a call to an old friend
你那里天气好吗 How's the weather there?
有什么新闻可以当作笑话 any news is worth a laugh?

回忆与我都不爱说话 I enjoy silence with memories
偶尔我会想起他 think of him sometimes
心里有一些牵挂 some concerns lingering inside
有些爱却不得不各安天涯 love sometimes has to be apart

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花 think of his flowers when the night is silent
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话 and some crushing love words he said
赌一把幸福的筹码 bet on my own happiness
在人来人往的街头想起他 remember him in the busy street
他现在好吗 is he all right?
可我没有能给你想要的回答but I have no reply for you

可是你一定要幸福呀 but make sure be happy

回答2：

都翻译的差不多了..挺好.

有什么新闻可以当作笑话
Is there anything can be a joke?

回忆与我都不爱说话
Memories keep silent as the way I did.

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话
It reminds me that the flowers he gave to me,and the loving word that he said to me in this quiet night.

赌一把幸福的筹码
这个的确不好翻译．呵呵．我也不知道．sorry

回答3：

你一定要幸福
You surely must be happy

沿着路灯一个人走回家
和老朋友打电话
你那里天气好吗
有什么新闻可以当作笑话
Along the streetlight
Walking alone back
Making phone to a old friend
"How about the climate?
Any interesting thing as a joke?"

回忆与我都不爱说话
偶尔我会想起他
心里有一些牵挂
有些爱却不得不各安天涯
My Memory like me is silent
Occasionally I miss him in heart
Some care for him after part（分手）
Though some love we have to separate

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话
赌一把幸福的筹码
在人来人往的街头想起他
他现在好吗
可我没有能给你想要的回答
可是你一定要幸福呀
Think of the beautiful flowers he sent
when it's in the still of night
Some loving words we ever said
They really make me heart-break
The happiness chip I want to bet
Miss him in the crowded street
"How is he getting along?"
But I have no answer you want
You surely must be happy at last

回答4：

沿着路灯一个人走回家
Along the street lights, I'm going home,

和老朋友打电话
Talking with an old friend on cell phone,

你那里天气好吗
How about the weather there?

有什么新闻可以当作笑话
And any news really interesting?

回忆与我都不爱说话
Either recall or I don't like to talk,

偶尔我会想起他
Sometimes I still think of him,

心里有一些牵挂
Something I still care about,

有些爱却不得不各安天涯
But love has to be apart.

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花
in the dark and sillent night, remember the flowers he gave,

还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话
And also the unforgetable honeyed words

赌一把幸福的筹码
Let me make a bet on my happiness.

在人来人往的街头想起他
In the busy street, I think of him

他现在好吗
How are you right now?

可我没有能给你想要的回答
Though I don't have the answer you want.

可是你一定要幸福呀
And you, please be happy all the time.

以上是我的简单翻译.

而你的翻译我觉得还是很不错的.但是挑错是个不容易的事情.我给改动了一点点,考虑到更多的是语言习惯,和歌词应该尽量的简单和押韵的特点.不知道你觉得怎样.

Walk to home under the street light alone, phoning an old friend,
"What's the weather like there?
Anything interesting to share?"

Memory and I are both silent,
I still think of him sometimes.
Something is hard to forget.
But some love is destined to be apart.

Remind of the flowers you gave
with your most emotional love words
in the wholly quiet night,
which was all used to bet on a truly love.

Remind of you at the rackety street,
"are you fine now?
Though I didn't give you the answer you wanted,
please be happy always.

回答5：

You must be happy
Singer: He Jie words: song Tian Tang: Wu Meng - Qi

Along the lights of a person walking home
Call an old friend and
Okay you where weather
What is the news may be regarded as a joke

Memories and I have不爱说话
Occasionally I will think of him
Some worried about heart
Some love it to the Security天涯

In夜深人静when reminded of those he sent flowers
Also made some撕心裂肺situation so
赌一把happy chips
People coming and going in the street think of him
He is now okay
I can not give the answer you want

But you must be happy ah

回答6：

楼上的说语法，我就说意境吧
其实个人觉得翻译不需要逐字逐句的，特别是这种歌词型，里面有句“回忆与我都不爱说话”，老实说，看英文版“Memory and I are both silent”的时候，没反应过来——有点chinglish

然后给人的感觉，说话的引号部分太白话，其他的语句又走抒情路线，语气有些不统一。因为是歌词，最好都用一种语调，否则会少了那种感觉。

嘿嘿，因为最近MP3刚下了这歌，我也翻了一下，不过老实说，翻完对照一下，觉得太罗嗦了，你的简洁版也不错。。。。

你一定要幸福
Please Be Happy
歌手：何洁词:唐恬曲:吴梦奇

沿着路灯一个人走回家
和老朋友打电话
你那里天气好吗
有什么新闻可以当作笑话
Walking alone under the streetlight
phoning an old friend,
"Is it sunny there?
having any news sharing here?

回忆与我都不爱说话
偶尔我会想起他
心里有一些牵挂
有些爱却不得不各安天涯
Memories are fading
But his smile occasionally coming
I know I have to forget
'Course not every love story have a happy ending

在夜深人静的时候想起他送的那些花
还说过一些撕心裂肺的情话
赌一把幸福的筹码
在人来人往的街头想起他
他现在好吗
可我没有能给你想要的回答
Reminding the beautiful flowers he gave
Reminding the emotional love he shout
In this deep night, to bet on our fate

Occasionally thinking of him, occasionally missing him
Is he happy?
Though I have no answer to answer

可是你一定要幸福呀
Yet, please, be happy

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