Good afternoon: My name is ...... I am 17-year-old from Xinjiang. I graduated from Urumqi forestry School,majored is tourism. I feel honored to have the chance to be here today.(I'd like to take this chance to further introduce myself.过渡一下)I like reading and surfing the internet. As for my character,I am easy-going,open-mined,and always have good relationship with my friends and relatives.
Before,I worked in the hotel as an intern,which enables me to gain much experience,so I am confident that I'll have good performance on this new job. Just want all of you present can give me a chance.(希望在座的各位考官能给我个机会,因为我有信心如果我得到这个工作,我会有很好的表现。)
Thanks.
英文帮你改动了下,不是按照你的原文一句句翻译的,大概意思没变,思维帮你整理了下。祝你成功。另外给点分啊,兄弟。
Good morning/ Good afternoon examiners,
My name is ............... and I am 17 years old. I came from Xin Jiang. I graduated at Ururqi foresty school, the major course I studied was tourism. Today it is my pleasure to be here today. In my leisure time , I read books and go on to the internet. I am a optimistic and an easygoing person. I have a good relationship with my family and friends. I am confident with myself, before I worked in an hotel for internship which developed me a better experience. I hope the presents of all could approve me and provide me a treasury opportunity.
Thank you
Good afternoon examiners! my name is ..,i'M 17 years old and i come from the wulumuqi forasty university which is in xinjiang province.i major in tourism,i'm thankful that i can take part in this examnation here,In my spare time, i like reading books and surfing the internet.i'm a person who is outgoing and kind ,It's worth to mention that i can get along with my surrounding.in addition , i can live with my family in peace.i'm confident with myself since i had more practice in restaurants before, as a result , i have mro practical experience,i hope i can be accepted ,Finaly i strongly want to get this opportunity to work for your company. that's all. thank you!
Examiner: Good afternoon, my name is ... ... ,17 years old this year, from Xinjiang Urumqi forestry school, my major is tourism. Here today to take an examination, I feel very happy. I usually like to read a book and the Internet, my character more cheerful, easy-going, relationship to anything around, friends and loved ones can live together in peace together. I was full of confidence to oneself, I used in the hotel internship, so there is a certain practical experience, hope everybody can approve me, for me this opportunity. Thank you for examiner!
Good afternoon, dear exminers! I'm ……,17 years old. I come from the wulumuqi forasty university and major in tourism. Extremely bright to attend this interview today. During my spare time, extracurriculum activities contribute to broden my horizons, such as surfing the Internet ,reading books and so on. With out-going and easy-going characters, I can get along with my surroundings including my family and my friend. What's more, I'm full of confidence since I used to be an internship in a hotel and ,to some extent, have some practical experience.
Hoping you can admit me and give me a chance. Many thanks for your time and attention!