英语作文的问题，我最近在学习英语，写了作文 不知道找谁改，请各位好心人帮帮忙。5月份要考试了。

1.1 Advertisments Advertisements are getting their way into people's lives.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: people, masses, crowd, throng, mob 均有“人们，人群”之意。
1.2 for example: it always insert advertisments some minutes, when we watch Tv.
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: moment, minute, instant 均含“瞬间，片刻”之意。
[中式英语] insert...advertisments 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
1.3 Sometimes it upsets to me.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: upset, agitate, disturb, perturb 均有“使不安，使心烦意乱”之意。
1.4 when we walk outside, the advertisements are arounded us.
[拼写错误] arounded 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: walk, stride, stroll, strut, pace 均有“行走，徒步”之意。
1.5 In a word: advertisement not anywhere.
2.6 Does the advertisements is ture?
[拼写错误] 建议将ture改为true。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 do...advertisement 在教材中出现过 32 次
[中式英语] does the advertisements 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
2.7 in fact, ti is not over true.
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[高分词汇] true是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为accurate 。
2.8 we not really always belive ourself eyes to see, bu also know and research it.
[拼写错误] 建议将belive改为believe。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将ourself改为ourselves。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: know, learn, comprehend, understand 都含“懂，知道，明了”之意。
2.9 I belive that a good products don, t need expressly advertising.
[拼写错误] belive 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: announce, declare, proclaim, pronounce, advertise, broadcast, publish 均含“宣布，公开”之意。
2.10 It been known , in doesn't dvertise situation.
[拼写错误] dvertise 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: condition, state, status, situation, circumstance 均有“状况，情况”之意。
3.11 But a few people can do ti, they always believe advertisments said.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: believe, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。
[ 高分词汇] but是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为nonetheless或nevertheless。
[中式英语] advertisments said 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
3.12 Blind following and spend much mony for it, that leads to heavy loads for life.
[拼写错误] mony 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[动词错误] 动词 blind 后面一般不接现在分词
[学习提示] 易混词汇: pursue, follow, chase, hunt, trace, track, trail 均含“跟随，追踪”之意。
[高分词汇] lead to是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为contribute to或conduce to或result in 。
[中式英语] heavy loads for life 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
4.13 In oen's all life has much somethings can pursue, keep the enthusiasm for life.
[拼写错误] oen 拼写错误，可替换选项为：
[语法检查] 建议把 much somethings 改成 many somethings (Revise...)
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: zeal, enthusiasm 均含“热情”之意。

改:1.the advertisements are all arounded us.
2.advertisements are everywhere
3."Does the advertisements is ture?"改为:"Does the advertisement is ture?"