2011-2012北京市东城区初三第一学期英语期末作文范文

十、文段表达 (15分)
75. One possible version:
I made it
We’ll have to take the PE test in May. But it was a big problem for me because I didn’t run fast enough. I must do something to improve. So I made a plan. Every morning, as soon as I got to school, I started running around the playground. I ran slowly at the beginning. And soon I could run much faster. I kept practicing and never gave up. Now I am among the top ten runners in my class. I am so proud that I made it. I’m sure I will pass the PE test in May.

书面表达评分标准：
第一档：（15~13分）
 完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（12~9分）
 基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（8~5分）
 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（4~0分）
 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。

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