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Dear Professor:
I really want to go to......college because I know it's a college that …………（写一些你为什么喜欢这所大学或者你为什么想去e.g. I'm keep dreaming about and I also find a lot of information about the school online which just made fall in love with this school）.But my tofel score is not that engaging, well I think about the reasons why I haven't got a good grade in Tofel test yet, and I found two reasons below:
First, I really don't have enough time to prepare the test, it's only been a month since I start known about Tofel and take the test. Well even worse is that what I learn from my high school can't help with the tofel test because what we actually do for the English class at school is learning about grammer and remember tons of vocabulary. And the tofel test is more flexible, in order to get a pleased score in tofel test we have to have comprehensive abilities such as good at listening speaking and writing. So a month is too tight for me to learn all of them.
Second, ……is my first try, I knew nothing about how everything would go before the test so I felt really nervous. And this really influnced my normal play. When I saw my grade I was really upset about it. So I try my best and I'm very lucky that I got another chance at …… And I belive that I can get a commendable grade at this time.
At last, I want to say some thing about myself. When I was 8 years old my mom died and my dad has his own business so that he don't have enought time to take care of me even though he was trying his best to gave me a good living space. But those didn't make me down. Like my friends always say that I'm an outgoing and humorous girl and also very independently, because since my mom died I tried to take care of myself and study and live all by myself. And my school grades are always really high. So I can say that I do have enough abilitles to get a high score in the coming test, all I need is a little bit more time. And I will contact you and let you know my score as soon as it comes out. I really really hope you could give me another chance, because go to ……（大学名）is my dream since I was very young! So please give me a chance and let me show you how good I am.

Dear professor:Because I want to * * * * University, but my TOEFL score is not very ideal, so I think there may be the following reasons:1 I began to prepare for the TOEFL examination from has not only * months, as everyone knows, Chinese English hard education is the TOEFL and learning are two entirely different learning modes, in China we only learn grammar and vocabulary memory, but the TOEFL requirement is very comprehensive, need of listening speaking reading and writing everything. So here I * months and not very systematic learning.2 * * on the TOEFL exam is my first exam, obtain such result I was reluctant, I had a hard time for the * * * on the toefl. I have every confidence in * * * on the examination to obtain good results.I am an independent girl, because my mother when I was eight years old when his father died, always focused his career, also give me a good living environment, so small to large is a conscious effort to learn. I have full capacity in the TOEFL exam get good grades, I may still need some time and effort. I will be in the * * * day out after contact with you as soon as possible, I hope you can give me a chance, I will never regret.