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A high crosslinking density network interpenetrating structure is by the British broadcasting corporation (BBC) and the American broadcasting company formed between composite coating in the reaction. For this reason, the composite coating can keep corrosive substances from the wet method refined zinc more effectively

A high crosslinked density interpenetrating structure network is formed by the reaction between BBC and ABC during the forming composite conversion coating. For this reason, the composite conversion coating could keep the corrosive substances from the zinc more effectively.

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