My hometown, Linzi, is locatede in the east of Zibo in Shandong province. Linzi is warm in winter and cool in summer, and it is a very charming and energetic city. People in Linzi are very friendly and hospitable to the guests. I am proud of my hometown and feel honored to be a Linziness.(这句给你调整了一下:我为家乡感到骄傲,并以自己是一名临淄人感到自豪) Recent years, lots of tall buildings are built in the Linzi commercial district where some modern mall are located. A good view in my hometown is the Taigong Lake in Linzi Park, and on the other side of the lake is Olympic garden in which there are many special bulidings.
PS: 亲,你这个中文介绍,逻辑性不太强啊。所以我只能按你的语序帮你翻译了。不过作简要介绍这段英文应该可以了。
Content: my hometown of Linzi in the eastern part of Zibo city. Linzi cool in summer and warm in winter, but he has a very attractive, very vibrant city, people are friendly to visitors, I feel very fortunate living here. The business district of Linzi built many buildings, there are also a few good shopping center. There is a beautiful park Tai Gong lake. On the other side is the Olympic Garden, there are some very interesting architecture.
My hometown is located in Linzi, Zibo City, east. Linzi cool, but he has a very charming, very vibrant city, people are very friendly to tourists, I feel very lucky to live here. Linzi's a lot of new high-rise business district, there are a few good shopping centers. Where there is a beautiful lake park great-grandfather. The other side of the Olympic Garden, there are some very interesting architecture.