[英语]请教高手英文翻译哪里还可以改进?

Today is my grandma's birthday.Although I did not go there（go to her's 去奶奶家，要讲清楚）, I was presented a feast for the mouth（这句我理解很困难，谁给你带回来的？直接说XX brought me some yummies of the feast不就完了？）,especially my favourite Tangculiji（拜托，糖醋里脊也不是这样说的吧？Fried Pork with Sugar and Venegar似乎醋是这么拼写的吧？）, And(and) Songshuguiyu（同理，改为Steamed Mandarin Fish ） which I can(多余去掉) seldom eat.(+It's )120yuan for each.If I were to buy (pay for)it I would be very sorry.Haha,and my favourite drinks (+were )brought(+back) by my (+younger )sister, being happy.She has gone just now,taking a light(flight) to Dalian,(改为
the hometown of Sunnan).How do I know?I heard it from my dear disciple(这词太重了，换为little buddy).Haha,I believe my sister will (+surely )have fun.