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If I could return to the past

If there will ever be a day, when I am granted the power of returning to my past, I would choose to go back to when I was still a primary school student. Looking back at my life, that was perhaps the most joyous and innocent years I had ever had. I was old enough to be aware of the fun and passion of life, but young enough to be ignorant of the darker side of the world. Day in, day out, I studied, played with friends and read children’s novels. I was free of responsibilities and liabilities. I could dive into the sea of imagination and marvel at the magnificence of my own creation. But such days are gone, and I am not what I used to be. Things become complicated the older you grow, and happiness never seems to be as pure as it was. If I could go back to those golden years, I would surely sit back and enjoy it whilst they last.

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I want to go back to the Tang Dynasty, if I could, I must take a camera, to where the antediluvian Gu Yun to shoot down, and then back to twenty-first Century. Back to the Tang Dynasty, we can experience the ancient prosperous Tang Dynasty can also witness the changes, may have a look how Li Shimin rule.Go back to the future, we can also use the modern technology to teach ancient people, let them work need not be so tired!
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If I could return to the past

If there will ever be a day, when I am granted the power of returning to my past, I would choose to go back to when I was still a primary school student. Looking back at my life, that was perhaps the most joyous and innocent years I had ever had. I was old enough to be aware of the fun and passion of life, but young enough to be ignorant of the darker side of the world. Day in, day out, I studied, played with friends and read children’s novels. I was free of responsibilities and liabilities. I could dive into the sea of imagination and marvel at the magnificence of my own creation. But such days are gone, and I am not what I used to be. Things become complicated the older you grow, and happiness never seems to be as pure as it was. If I could go back to those golden years, I would surely sit back and enjoy it whilst they last.

want to go back to the Tang Dynasty, if I could, I must take a camera, to where the antediluvian Gu Yun to shoot down, and then back to twenty-first Century. Back to the Tang Dynasty, we can experience the ancient prosperous Tang Dynasty can also witness the changes, may have a look how Li Shimin rule.Go back to the future, we can also use the modern technology to teach ancient people, let them work need not be so tired!

the moment i want to get back the most is my 6 years old birthday. That day, I had a big party in the backyard of my home. My parents, grandparents, my uncles and aunts and all of my friends attended the party. We enjoyed the barbecue for dinner together and i cut the huge birthday cake by myself, which is sweet and delicious!
after the dinner, we played hide and seek with my friends. as a child at that time, it was the most interesting game for me. Before i went to bed, my parents gave me a serious talk about my future, which was a turning point to my life. They encouraged me to be an egineer of electric or computer and i agreed with them!
Now i am a student of high school and prepare for the college entrance examination. My will is Schoo of Electronic in Tsuing Hua university and i believe i can make the dream come true!

If someone ask me which time you would like to go back, I will say " qing dynasty". Recently, you can watch many traversing TV plays on your TV, and most of them go back to the qing dynasty. These beautiful girls all came across the handsome, charming, and considerate princes. If I can also go back there, I want to help them with my historical knowledge, such as, don't believe in queen CiXing, or don't closed to the western culture etc.