in China, College Entrance Examination becomes a hot topic every june, this year, it is reported that during the grading of College Entrance Exmination, one of the universities in Shaanxi province hired College students, this is very unjust, they can't hire unqualified college students to do such an important work because some of them may not be careful and knowledgable enough. in my opinion, the relevant aprtment should carry out forceful policy to avoid such cases from happening and give the grading faculty more time to finish the grading work.
写起来很辛苦,求采纳
第一步:先把要点展开用简单的英语列出详细提纲
1. Those who are employed to go over examination papers must be qualified correspondingly
* each of them must be provided with the qualification a certificate for teachers.
* he needs to gain experience in teaching at school or college for some years.
* he is supposed to be selfless and well-behaved.
2. It will produce a severe result to fire into the wrong flock(失误)
* Some of the examinees are afraid not to be able to be enrolled or to be wrongly enrolled by a college.
* making mistakes is bound to fall beneath fairness(有失公平)
* the nation can not select competent persons with ability from the examinees
3.My suggestion is that all the measures should be engaged and selected from high schools or colleges
第二步:增加与已提供开头的连接的过度句
* It is seriously a thing to go over examination papers,
第三部:合并已提供开头用关联词语整理成文
As we all know, the fairness of the national college entrance exam is highly valued by people. Many measures are taken to guarantee it. However, it is reported that some undergraduate students from a college in Xi’an are employed to mark the papers. How can the fairness be ensured.
It is seriously a thing to go over examination papers. Those who are employed to go over examination papers must be qualified correspondingly. Firstly, each of them must be provided with the qualification a certificate for teachers. Besides, he needs to gain experience in teaching at school or college for some years. The third, he is supposed to be selfless and well-behaved.
It will produce a severe result to fire into the wrong flock. Some of the examinees are afraid not to be able to be enrolled or to be wrongly enrolled by a college. So, in the first place, making mistakes is bound to fall beneath fairness, and in the next place, the nation can not select competent persons with ability from the examinees.
My suggestion is that all the measures should be engaged and selected from high schools or colleges.