英语翻译

楼上的look forward to的用法用问题。
应该是look forward to doing sth 或 look forward to sth.
没有用作 look forward to sb. to do sth.的格式

I'm looking forward to your kind response with a chance to ignite my dream.
后面可以加上：Sincerely thanks to you from the bottom of my heart! (“发自内心的感谢！”或“衷心地感谢！”）
或者： I will greatly appreciate if I could get this chance. (如能得到此次机会，本人将万分感激。）

望各位英语高手指正、切磋。

I'm sincerely looking forward to having the chance you give me so that it can lit up my dream .
有不懂的还可以追问~望采纳~

Hoping you can give me a chance to realize my dream.