高考英语作文评分 看这篇作文能得多少分 满分25分 请指出语法错误

挺不错的。至少能拿个20分以上，要我打可能23左右。基本意思表达很好，语法和单词也不错，但是就是有些用法稍微有点感觉怪怪的。。。（别嫌我啊）

就这两句
“ Despite the discouragement, I tried to get mother's supportness” change to "Despite her disapproval, I tried to get her support."

"as the college entrance exam draws nearer and nearer." change to "draws near"

"my eagerness to join in them grows stronger and stronger" personally speaking, I would use the word “my interest in these clubs grows stronger and stronger"

"showed her understanding to me" change to ”showed understanding“

还有，用Mum好像更好啊，难道您整天管妈妈叫 "母亲”么？

如果真的是高考作文的话分会很低，全都是语法错误，例如结尾句，都没有动词，根本不是完整的句子。如果你愿意提高悬赏分的话，我可以帮你修改好。

Ah Fu is a dog .As for it's a dog . We all proud of it .句子重复啰嗦，把第二句删掉。

7分，一眼扫过去没一个完整的句子

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