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As (a) basketball fan, I like Yao Ming best. He is 2.26m tall and (weighs) 134kg. In 2002, he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket. He trains every day in order to (improve) his skills. His performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad. He never gives up. He once said, "(On) the court, what I think (is) only how to play well, no matter who the opponent is." He is also a man (showing) love and sense of responsibility for society. He once donated a lot (of) money to a child who had leukemia. His success tells us (that) we should do everything as (possibly) as (we) can. I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
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As a basketball fan,I like Yao Ming best.He is 2.26m tall and 134kg heavy.In2002,he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket.He trained every day in order to improve his skills.His performance in the NBA had won hearts at home and abroad.He never gave up.He once said,"In the court,what I think was only how to play well,no matter who the opponent is."He is also a man showed love and sense of responsibility for society.He once donated a lot money to a child who had leukemia.His success tells us what we should do everything as possible as they can.I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
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